Mokai's writings

i was thinking of making a web comic...of the evil adventures of...Mokai!!!! this is a writing of it...hehehe....enjoy

Mokai: *walks around Maritsu* where the hell is the heart bank!? *looks to the right* oh..there it is! *walks towards it*
Raspberyl: where did Mokai go?..maybe she went to go tamper with Mao's heart
Mao: *overhears Raspberyl and starts running towards the heart bank*

Mokai: *goes into Mao's heart* I wonder if there is any memories of those humans in dad's heart... when they were human *looks around*
Raspberyl: *sigh* well..i guess...i have to help...oh well..its a good thing to help!
Mao: *goes inside his heart* where can Mokai be? why cant she go into Beryl's heart?!

Mokai: *runs around looking for any mermories* hey..there is a game console..maybe i should turn it on...
Raspberyl: *finnaly gets to Mao's heart* how can..Mao run this fast? oh well..hopefully Mokai isnt tempering around with something important...
Mao: *finnaly finds Mokai* great...now she is gonna turn on a mermory from...a loong time ago!

Mokai: *hears something* ??? *turns around* is it me or am i paraniod...
Raspberyl: *sees Mao and Mokai* i sense a chase scene
Mao: *runs towards Mokai* Mokai! your not supposed to be tampering around with my heart...you can tamper with Beryl's though! dont make me take away your "beating the hell out of The Vato Brothers" Privlages!

Mokai: fine..i wont tamper with your heart...but I will do this!*grabs Mao and throws him*
Raspberyl: *blank stare* does everything go crazy without Almaz and Sapphire!?
Mao: DO NOT THROW ME MOKAI! *chases Mokai*

Mokai: uh oh*starts running from Mao* my parents are crazy...
Raspberyl: damnit Mao!*chases Mao*
Mao: great..were gonna be having a chase scene for 30 mins....again!

THE END!

ok....to answer some wonderments..this is a Disgaea 3 comic....its supposed to be around 1205 years after Disgaea 3...and Mokai is the daughter of the Disgaea 3 Main Characters! Mao and Raspberyl! i may try drawing this....and also...next writing...Sapphire and Almaz make an appearnce...as Angels...because o course..as humans they have to die....and they sinned a little bit so Almaz and Sapphire became prinnies...for 1 month...and then they became angels.....Stay Tuned to this wierd webcomic-writing-thingy ,Folks!

here is a Preview of my second writing! but since it is disgaea...it may not be an average preview

Raspberyl: Hi~! time for my preview! this preview could be more popular then the writing itself
Mokai: are you making a refernce!?
Raspberyl: In writing 2..believe it or not but Mao may not appear at all!
Mao: i wont appear!? THATS IMPOSSIBLE!!!!
Raspberyl: so here comes new Main-Main characters in the series! Angel Almaz and Sapphire!
Sapphire: Wait..now Im included! yay!
Almaz: hopefully things are different then before...
Raspberyl: so...sorry Mao but they appear...i appear ...and you dont!
Mao: thats not very deliquent-y...and also how can I NOT appear..im one of the main characters! i am an overlord! and I am Mokai's evil father!
Mokai: does that matter..i have to appear and wierdly she gets her own way!
Raspberyl: well everyone has there reasons!

PREVIEW END!

here is a Mini Comic i thought of in 3 minutes!

Raspberyl: *drags Mokai* please go to class, Mokai....you havent gone to class yet..
Mokai: whast your point? its an honor students way of not...GOING TO CLASS! *runs away*
Raspberyl: aw..she got away....thats sad *sigh*

1 HOUR LATER!

Mokai: *runs out of Mao's heart*
Mao: MOKAI! you arent allowed to tamper with my heart! you can tamper with Beryl's heart though
Mokai: but mom's heart is so boring! *continues running*

30 MINS LATER

Mokai: *goes up to Mao and Raspberyl with explosive cake* CAKE!
Raspberyl: Mokai...please dont-
Mokai: *explodes cake and hits Mao and Raspberyl
Mao:...Beryl it was the hugest mistake ever to have a child with you....
Raspberyl: *slaps Mao*

BONUS END!
WRITING 2: COMING SOON TO A NETHERWORLD NEAR YOU!

Mokai is at her house..inside of Maritsu Evil Academy!

Mokai: *sigh* why arent my parents home...when they arent around...they are doing something creepy...*shudder* maybe i should walk around here and look for them
Raspberyl" *comes in out of nowhere* actually... Mao is just missing....i think he said something about an Angel Hero...
Mokai: oh...well..why didnt you go with him!? he cannot be trusted alone
Raspberyl: and this is coming from his won daughter....well..actually you got a point...

MEANWHILE

Mao: LEMME EXPIREMNT ON YOU,ALMAZ! i always wanted to expiremnt on an Angel hero! its better then a hero
Sapphire: but..Sir Mao..wouldnt that kill Almaz?
Mao: he is an angel though! he would survive!
Almaz: im rather scared though
Raspberyl: *comes in out of nowhere holding a rocket launcher* MAO! do not plan on expiremnting on Almaz!
Mokai: *behind Raspberyl* you cant be trusted alone!...
Mao: damnit! Beryl! *grabs Beryl and takes her as far away as possible*
Sapphie: i wonder whats with their secret chitchat
Almaz: and i wonder so amny other things...like...*looks at Mokai*
Mokai: ? what...dont look at me like that!
Sapphire: you look so cute! but that cuteness seems...familiar
Almaz: ? what do you mena by "familiar"?
Mokai: um...she obviously means that my cuteness reminds her of my mother
Almaz: so if your so cute..and its familair...and your cute like your mother...then that means....

MEANWHILE IN MAO AND RASPBERYL's SECRET CHITCHAT
Raspberyl: your reason for dragging me..?
Mao: i have not told them about Mokai and...if they find out...they might freak and...uh...they may think we love eachother!
Raspberyl: *a little annoyed* and thats a problem?
Mao: yes!...now lets back away slowly before Almaz and Sapphire find out!
Raspberyl: ok then *backs away*

BACK TO MOKAI
Sapphire: your Raspberyl's daughter! i actually find that nice...and cutesy!
Almaz: how long have we been gone?
Mokai: and you proably dont know how much evil i am..and who my dad is...hint: i am an overlords heir and my father is the dean of maritsu evil academy!
Almaz: and...*eyes whiden* Lord Mao..and Miss Beryl!? *faints*
Sapphire: well....thats so more cute! but...question...are your parents in love?
Mokai: no....i am related to them though...i just exist so my father would have an heir
Sapphire: well that clears everything...maybe we should stick around Maritsu for a while...just for Sir Mao
Almaz: *still in faint*
Sapphire: come on Almaz *drags him*

MEANWHILE...AGAIN!
Mao: and on the side note I did appear..so take that,Beryl!
Raspberyl: *sigh* the previews are always wierd...even if i did it...

THE END!! (finnaly)
BONUS: CAST NOTES
Mao: do not judge me of the things i do!
Raspberyl: i didnt act as deliqnuenty in this writing
Mokai: i really am Overlord Mao`s daughter...how do you think i got into his heart..and how do you explain my cuteness...that i got from my mother...
Almaz: im not gonna lie...i truelly was scared of the fact that Mao and Beryl have a daughter
Sapphire: im not always obsessed with cute things

THE END OF THIS POST!

this is gonna be a short thing before writing 3...so...

Raspberyl: *walks around*...i just noticed something....Almaz and Sapphire are missing!
Mao: well..i think that explains why Mokai is missing also..
Raspberyl: ok then...where can Mokai be off to then?
Mao: proably the heart bank,of course!

MEANWHILE

Almaz: Miss Mokai..why did you drag us here?
Mokai: so we can tamper with my father's heart!
Sapphire: and why would you wanna tamper with Sir Mao's heart?
Mokai: becuase..its fun!
Almaz: well...that still isnt good
Sapphire: so...Mokai i wont let you tamper with his heart! sorry if i have to do this...HELL STRIKE!*hits Mokai and she goes flying*

AND BACK TO MAO AND RASPBERYL

Mao: Beryl....i think i heard something
Raspberyl: well...what does that mean?
Mokai: WHAT THE HELL~! *lands on Mao and Raspberyl*
Mao: ow! Mokai what are you doing here?!
Mokai: Saphhire hit me....
Raspberyl: well...i wasnt expecting that
Mao: even though,Mokai..you might have wanted to tamper with my heart...i wll beat the hell out of Sapphire!
Raspberyl: oh look..Mao was gonna do something a little nice...oh well...*hits Mao with a mallet* you should not hurt Sapphire!...its not like Mokai would become corrupted
Mokai: you should not have done that,mother...*runs away*
Mao: damnit Beryl!

INTER MISSION END!
WRITING 3....COMING...UM...MAYBE SOON!

writing 3 has been tohught of very quickly!....and on the side note..Mokai is 814 years old

AT MARITSU EVIL ACADEMY

Mokai: okay! who hid my Slaystation Portable!?
Raspberyl: that would be me,...because you wont stop trying to tamper with Mao's heart
Mokai: damn your delinquency!
Sapphire: i dont think that is a good way to talk to Beryl
Raspberyl: um..i dont think Mokai cares
Mokai: well i dont care!
Sapphire: well it is still rude to back talk Beryl,Mokai!
Almaz: i dont think you should try to upset Mokai,Sapphire..
Mao: of course she shouldnt! bad things would happen! Mokai might break my Slaystation!
Raspberyl: that should not be important Mao! *slaps him*
Mao: stop hitting me,Beryl! *sigh* ..*starts walking away*
Almaz: i think you upsetted Mao,Miss Beryl
Mokai: i respectly disagree...
Mao: *quietly goes into his room*

NOW FOR A WHILE IT WILL JUST BE MAO ALONE

Mao: why does Beryl keep hitting me?! she shouldnt hit me! i could easily hurt her if i wanted to! *goes up to one of his shelves and grabs something* sometimes i do things i shouldnt do...like say something evil near Beryl! sometimes she really gets on my nerves--!
Almaz: *enters* uh..Lord Mao...is anything wrong
Mao: nothing! i just dont like getting hit by Beryl!
Almaz: you know she just dosent like anything evil though
Mao: and your point is..?
Almaz: um...well she is just different thats all..*looks at what Mao is holding* uh..Lord Mao...what do you have in your hand?
Mao:..something that isnt any of your buisness!
???: what Mao is holding..is a ring..
Mao: huh? that voice seems familair..
???: well obviously im familiar..i am your True Heart!
Almaz: oh...thank god it isnt any demon lords
Mao: wait! how did you get here! and how do you know what i have!
True Heart Mao: i know because i am part of your heart,obviously!
Almaz: well..thats understandble...but why does Mao have a ring?
Mao: um..no reason!
True Heart Mao: that..i can show you in Mao's heart!
Mao: dont you dare! dont you dare show Almaz THAT memory!
Almaz: huh? what Memory?
True Heart Mao: *takes them to Mao's heart*
Mao: are you still gonna show him THAT memory?
Almaz: uh..Lord Mao..thats basicly the reason he took us here..
True Heart Mao: *activates a memory using Mao's ring*
Mao: they never do listen!

MEMORY FROM 814 AND 4 NETHER MONTHS AGO

Mao: *plays a RPG game on his Slaystation*
Raspberyl: *enters* HI,Mao-y~!
Mao: Beryl! what the hell do you want!? are you wanting to bug me while im playing my game!?
Raspberyl:dont be mad at me! *grabs a rocket launcher*
Mao: damnit! *goes up to Raspberyl* im in the middle of a game..so do not bother me!
Raspberyl: fine..i will leave...and make a cake! *walks away*
Mao: i never thought i would get her to leave...she bugs me to much! *pulls out a ring* why the hell did i waste 35632 HL on this! *throws it* ..oh no..i relized that i never paid attention to what was going on...this "love" thing has happened to me..but hopefully that will go away...im too evil to exprience love! but that damn thing...why did i waste money on it? i guess this "love thing has afftected me since me and Beryl have known eahother for a while...that should be it..becuase if it was becuase of this father thing...then that might effect me forever! well..i can safely say that...love wont effect me! and no one will find out about this!
Raspberyl: *from distance* maybe i should throw this cake in your face,Mao!
Mao: *sigh* how am i able to handle her!?

BACK TO THE REAL WORLD

Mao: i cannot believe you showed that!
Almaz: and i cant belive..that you out of all people,Lord Mao...actually felt love..maybe for a little bit though
True Heart Mao: and unluckily he claims that he cannot feel that
Mao: *gets a little annoyed* Almaz! open your eyes! you should understand that i will always deny love! and it will stay that way so Mokai can learn her evil ways!
True Heart Mao: but remeber Mao...Raspberyl is your daughter's mother...so Mokai cant be totatly evil
Mao: just be quiet! *runs of*
Almaz: wait,Lord Mao! *runs after him* ... *speaks to hisself* Mao...he should understand love...he has known Beryl for a long time...and now they have a daughter together...guss these new adventures arent like the ones i had with Mao when he was just 1578 years old...
True Heart Mao: ..*disappears*
Mao: i will not know love...i will stay evil..and i dont care if Beryl tries to corrupt me with her good things and the fact that Mokai is her daughter also....sometimes i wonder how i can deal with Beryl...oh well...i better put away this ring before anyone else finds otu that love almost got me! *starts running faster*

MEANWHILE
Mokai: i have always wondered what dad was always getting me away from his heart...is he hiding something?
Raspberyl: well..Mao is different..and he has many memories that he dosetn want anyone to see...
Sapphire: ....on the side note..Beryl...we have never seen whats inside your heart!

THE END
TO BE CONTNUED!

in this writing...dramaticness happens...maybe

IN MARITSU EVIL ACADEMY
Sapphire: Beryl..will we ever get to see your heart?
Raspberyl: well...we can go to my heart later..i will allow you guys to go into my heart becuase i have no secrets to hide...unlike someone...
Mao: i know your hinting that i have serctes in my heart!
Mokai: *walks away somewhere*
Almaz: where is Mokai going?
Raspberyl: proably to see my heart and see my "secrets" before we go to my heart...

5 MINUTES LATER

Sapphire: can we go to your heart now,please?
Raspberyl: ok then...we can go now...Onwards to my heart with no secrets! *starts walking* ? *looks on the ground* hey! there is a letter on the floor!
Mao: I wonder why someone would send a letter out of nowhere
Almaz: maybe something bad has happened
Raspberyl: *reads the letter* !!! *body starts to shake*
Sapphire: Beryl? what does the letter say?
Raspberyl: .....the letter...is a letter from the PTA
Almaz: the Perfectly Trained Assasins!?
Raspberyl: yes..and it says...the PTA has kidnapped Mokai
Mao: *gets a little mad* Beryl,are you telling the truth?
Raspberyl: well of course i am telling the truth! i am not an evil demon like you!
Mao: ok..that i get....but still...why would those damned demons kidnap Mokai!?
Sapphire: aw~..Sir Mao is showing love~
Mao: i am not! its just that...they obviously want to fight me so they kidnap Mokai becuase they thought that might affect me!
Almaz: well..thats reasonable....
Raspberyl: Mao...i know your lying....you actually proably care that the PTA might kill Mokai...
Mao: i do not care about Mokai! you may care about her..but i do not!
Sapphire: i think your lying, Sir Mao
Mao: i am not lying! now lets go defeat the PTA!
Almaz: fine...if you are really wanting to save your daughter..then ill come with you!
Sapphire: i will help Sir Mao also to defeat the PTA!
Raspberyl: ill come along..just becuase i want to save Mokai before the impale her!
Mao: dont worry,Beryl..Mokai is evil and powerful...she can handle herself before we get there! so stop worrying!

MEANWHILE

Mokai: *is tied up* let me go! why did you kidnap me!? you know my parents and those 2 angels are gonna save me!
PTA Member : we kidnapped you so we can kill you and lure your damned parents here..so you can all die!
Mokai: you cannot kill my parents! they are too powerful for you! you obviously want to commit suicide!
PTA Member: shut up! we will kill your parents...and you...so just be a good little demon and wait for your death!
Mokai: i will not die..nor will my parents! so dont be dumb!
PTA member: do you have to be annoying *punches Mokai*
Mao: *comes in out of no where* step away from my daughter,you damned weak demon!

THE END
TO BE CONTINUED
PART 2 COMING SOON!

this took a while

PTA member: you cannot stop me,Mao! i will kill you and Mokai!
Beryl: i bet 500 HL you cant even kill me!
Almaz: i think me and Sapphire had just been forgotten...
Mao: pull out you weapon,PTA leader! i will fight you!
Mokai: *is almost done gett self untied* i wanna fight too,dad!
Beryl: i am gonna fight with you also,Mao! *pulls out demon book*
Sapphire: *helps untie Mokai* im gonna fight too! but not with a chainsaw!
Almaz: i guess if everyone is fighting..and i said ill be Mao's servant forever..i guess im fighting also..
Mokai: *is untied* your supposed to call dad "Lord Mao",Almaz!
Beryl: well...i did not see that coming...
Mao: less talk,more fighting!
PTA member: i am the leader of the PTA..you cannot beat me.... the battle is on,Mao!
Mao: finnaly..*uses blast finger*
Beryl: im gonna use a combo! *uses D-Rule 1: Morality and makes a combo with Mao*
Almaz: ill make the combo stronger! *uses Spinning SwordDance*
Sapphire: dont excule me! *uses Gunman Spirit*
Mokai: and..im joining! *uses Hurricane Slash*
PTA leader: *is hurt* ok..i didnt die..but i will not fight..i dont want you spamming that combo! *disappears*
Almaz: that was easier then i expected..
Beryl: *goes up to Mokai* Mokai...are you hurt? did that PTA meber did anything more then punch you?
Mokai: actually before you came..she struck me in the face with a whip 5 times...
Mao: but since you survived that...that proves that the PTA leader was pathetic!
Sapphire: i agree with Sir Mao!

A FEW HOURS LATER
Beryl: Mao..i relalized something..we have not seen Champloo for..1219 years!
Mao: i dont see you point,Beryl..he was a creepy teacher
Beryl: but..i dont know what happened to him..either he died or...waiting for a perfect moment to bug you and may be scared of Mokai
Mao: well..we will never know..but if he is coming i will not listen to his food lingo i cant understand!
Beryl: ok then..im gonna see if Mokai passed out while playing her Slaystaion 3..*walks away*

THE END!
WRTING 5 COMING SOON TO A NETHERWORLD NEAR YOU..!

IN MARITSU EVIL ACADEMY

Raspberyl: *sits somewhere crying*
Sapphire: *notices Beryl* Beryl? whats with you?
Beryl: um..well its just..today is just a horrible day...
Sapphire: how is today a horrible day today?
Beryl: um..its just something that happened...814 years ago..before Mokai was born..
Sapphire: well..maybe you telling me will help you feel better
Mao: if you hear it there will be a lot of Beryl crying!
Beryl: shuddup Mao! anyways..this is what happened


FLASHBACK, 814 YEARS AGO, MAOCH(March) 13TH
Beryl: *walks around* damn,Mao..he asks me,alone to get some candy..he just wanted me to leave so he an play his games and expirement on things! sometimes i can just throw an explosive at him for wanted me to leave..oh well..I guess his wierdness cant be helped..
???: you shouldnt wander alone,Beryl..a Delinquent like you can get killed...
Beryl: let me guess who you are,the PTA!?
PTA leader: yes..it is me..the leader of the PTA..now Beryl..i am here to kill you..becuase you have been avoiding the honor roll for too long! and i let you live...you will continue to avoid the honor rolll..and there will be a princess that is Half and Half around here! i will not let that happen!
Beryl: you cruel,heartless creep! *backs away*
PTA Leader: too bad Mao isnt with you to help you...becuase since your here alone...i might as well use half my power!
Beryl: *starts to run*
PTA Leader: you wont run from me! *stops here from running* i have always waited for the time that your alone..and weak..as always...*punches her in the face*
30 MINUTES lATER
Beryl: *is almsot dead* n-no..i will not die..i will not die
PTA leader: say that all you want..you are still going to die..REST IN PAIN,Raspberyl! *uses blade rush on her*
Beryl: NO! *trys to move but cant*
Mao: *comes in out of nowhere and blocks the Blade Rush* looks like my plan worked...
Beryl: Mao? what the hell are you doing!
Mao: i meant to send you out alone,Beryl..that was the only way to lure the PTA..and most of my vassals..to attack..
Beryl: as cruel as your plan is..atleast you protected me
Mao: THIS DOES NOT MEAN I KNOW LOVE,THOUGH!

TO BE CONTINUED
PART 2 of this will..be made when i become not so lazy

IN THE FLASHBACK

Mao: i guess i will kill everyone in an istnant..there is just 3 people attacking me..and your almost dead,Beryl..
Beryl: Mao..this plan you thought of is sick..you put two lives in danger!
Mao: so? i think i dont care about what happens to you..*uses Shining Beam on all of them*
Beryl: you think you dont care!?
Mao: Beryl..just nevermind.. ..the PTA leader is the only one left..i beat them so easily
PTA leader: Mao! you arent being a good evil overlord if you protect a delinquent!
Mao: i dont care...the PTA is just Honor Students who found an excuse to destroy Delinquents...but i do not crae for Beryl! thats not why i protected her!
PTA Leader: ok..you win again,Mao! but beware..you,Beryl and your princess will face my fury! you have been warned! *disappears*
Mao: wow...that was quick..
Beryl: i feel like fainting and coughing up blood..
Mao: i dont think the leader's move were fatal ,Beryl
Beryl: but..if they werent fatal...how can i almost be dead..
Mao: becuase your weak
Beryl: *sighs* oh well..im going back to the overlords castle..and im going to cough up blood in your room..then im gonna go to bed *walks away*
Mao: ok then..---wait? cough up blood in my room!? *runs towards Beryl*

FLASHBACK END
Sapphire: thats a sad story..you and Mokai could have died...its a pity i dont cry much
Almaz: that PTA always wants to kill you,i guess
Mao: from hearing that story,you must think im pretty evil to let Beryl go off alone and almost die..
Beryl: im still mad at you for that,Mao!
Mokai: *is eavesdropping* i almost died? Mom never told me this! and im Half and Half..thats why everyone attacks me and treats me badly...*dark auara surrounds here*
Beryl: *starts to cry again* there was a few times when i almost died...times where Mao heard of his vassals plans to kill me...and times where i just got chased...Mokai was dangerous..and she is still being attacked...and its just horrible! *runs away crying*
Mao: sheesh,Beryl! stop crying over the fact that a lot of people dont like a Half-Evil princess!
Almaz: seems like the fights never end
Sapphire: but i dont get it..if Mokai was so dangerous..then why was she born?

Mokai: Dad....why am i not completely evil? why am i Half-Delinquent!? why does everyone hate me!? *dark aura gets bigger*

TO BE CONTINUED
WRITING 6 COMING SOON

this is my 3rd writing today..and..it will also have a flashback!


Almaz: Beryl..what ever happened to those 2 girls that were with you in our past adventure?
Beryl: Kyoko and Asuka...they died
Sapphire: what happened to them!?
Mao: i know what happened...but i wont say
Beryl: ill tell them what happened,Mao!..it was another time before Mokai was born..and before i started hiding from the PTA


814 YEARS AND 4 NETHERMONTHS AGO
Beryl: *is walking around* i wonder why Mao chose me to..be the mother of his heir....
Kyoko: *sees Beryl and goes up to her* my lady! i havent seen you for 405 years!
Beryl: y-yeah i know
Asuka: are you still a delinquent?
Beryl: of course i am!
Kyoko: that is great....we can be a group again
Beryl: um..y-yeah...we can
Asuka: um...my lady..why are you acting a little nervous..and why do you look..slightly different?
Beryl: u-um..n-n-no reason...! *rolls eyes the other direction*
Kyoko: um..i think i know that action! i know the answer to your questions ,Asuka! *eyes whiden*
Asuka: Kyoko..whats with you?...you know the answers? Kyoko..why are you backing away? *gives it some thought* oh..my lord...i found out! *starts shaking*
Beryl: uh..do you have to make a big deal out of it!?
Kyoko: y-yes! um..my lady..can you tell us..?
Beryl: sure i..guess....Mao is going to have an Heir to Maritsu...
Asuka: that..that is...sorry if i say this...but that is creepy!
Beryl: well..since we didnt see eachother in a long time...maybe we can hang out later
Kyoko: why later?
Beryl: um...i need to tell Mao that..you guys are back..its the only truthful thing to do
Asuka and Kyoko: ok then..good bye..my lady! *walks away*
Beryl: *walks towards the overlord's castle*
PTA Leader: lucky i eavesdropped in the conversation of Delinquents..but..what the hell!? Mao and a delinquent are going to have a child!? i must stop this! *leaves*

AT THE OVERLORDS CASTLE
Mao: you saw Kyoko and Asuka!?
Beryl: yes..what is the problem?
Mao: i dont want more delinquents in the group!
Beryl: well..thats your problem
Mao: hmph..so..Beryl..did you tell them about..the situation?
Beryl: techinacly i didnt..they found out on their own..
Mao: *grabs Beryl* you should have hid! since they are delinquents they will tell the whole acdemy about this!
Beryl: *sigh* well..i dont know what they will do..they proably wont if i tell them not to!
Mao: fine! tell them not to tell! but if they still tell..i will put the blame on you!
Beryl: fine! *leaves*

10 MINS LATER
PTA leader: *comes up to Beryl* oh..Raspberyl..how bad to see you again..

TO BE CONTINUED
PART 2 WILL COME LATER

PTA Leader: Beryl..i know i have always wnated to turn you into an honor student...but now..i will actually kill you
Beryl: why would you want to kill me..being a delinquent isnt that bad!
PTA Leader: even so..i overheard you talking to those other delinquents..
Beryl: you overheard me want to put them in my group?
PTA Leader: not that...i know..THAT secret!
Beryl: *backs away and shakes* no..you cant know that!
PTA Leader: but i can...i Alexei..the Female Archer leader of the PTA..will make sure there si now Half-Evil Heir running around here! *uses hurrciane slash on Beryl*
Kyoko and Asuka: *block it and starts attacking Alexei*
Beryl: girls!? what are you doing?
Kyoko: well..we couldnt let 2 lives disppear before our eyes!
Asuka: and we will do anything for a friend!

1 HOUR LATER
Alexei: *disppears* you won again!
Kyoko and Asuka: we will watch you from heaven,our lady *dies*
Beryl: Kyoko! Asuka! *starts to cry* you died for me!

END FLASHBACK
Sapphire: wow..thats sad..Mokai would have loved them!
Almaz: Mao would want them to be servant
Mao: one delinquent is enough in my group!
Beryl: i wish Kyoko and Asuka were here...*sniffs*

THE END
WRITING 7 COMING SOON

i got bored..so i made this

IN THE OVERLORD'S CASTLE IN MARITSU..
Beryl: *walks around the castle in the middle of the night* where is that PTA! *grabs a steel spiked mallet* ! *runs around the castle*
Mao: *waks up from his sleep* why do i hear noise!? hopefully it isnt Almaz planning an escape!
Beryl: *hits the floor with the mallet*
Mao: *runs over to Beryl* BERYL!? what the hell are you doing?!
Beryl: *looks at Mao* oh..its just you..im just hunting PTA..i thought they might be here
Mao: why would you be hunting PTA!?
Beryl: to protect Mokai..she has been sleepwalking recently..so i thought she might get attacked!
Mao: Beryl..stop worrying about Mokai!! that..is being your excuse for everything!
Beryl: i can worry about Mokai if i want to! you dont care for her..so i should
Mao: whatever..im stealing your mallet next time you do this! *goes back into his room*
Beryl: well...i guess while it lasts...*hits the floor really hard with her mallet*
Mokai: *wakes up* dont be so annoying,mom...
Beryl: oh..well i just did this to bug Mao..which should happen in--
Mao: *throws a bomb at Beryl*

MINI COMIC END

Raspberyl: for everyone that have seen this webcomic..you may find this depressing..but..the series is ending!
Mao: Beryl! your lying! this series is ending...and there will be a series 2!
Almaz: thats right everyone! Series 1 is ending..while series 2 will be Mokai's version of disgaea 3!
Sapphire: we will appear though!
Ruby: im one of the new charcters! Ruby Von Almadine Admant! the daughter of Almaz and Sapphire that has been in clestai the whole time!
Bluebeil: i am the delinquent of the group! Bluebeil! Mokai's rival and love interest
Mokai: "love interest"!? HELL NO! *kicks him away* um..anways..in this adventure..its Disgaea 3 in my version...and i look more like my father in this..becuase i am 1578 in the series 2!
Mao: but we appear!
Shiru: and im Shiru!! the hero of the series! who will fight with angel princess Ruby!
Ruby: dont show off!
Beryl: and we appear in the series also!
Sapphire: other chatcters will appear later..so be paitient

Everyone: BE PREPARED! Disgaea: Makai Hime Mokai Series 2! "Adventures of Evil"
SEE YOU SOON IN THE NEW SERIES!!!

this is the end of series one! enjoy!

Beryl: *gets out of class* what should i do now..i think ill get Mokai into class
Mokai: *puts Beryl in a cage* hehehe..sorry,mom..but im not going to class! *runs*
Beryl: *sigh* somehow i dont regret being her mother...

MEANWHILE
Almaz: um...Sapphire..have you ever thought of bringing..that certain SOMEONE into the Netherworld
Sapphire: Mao would just get another vassal you know.
Almaz: well..there is that..

MEANWHILE AGAIN
Mao: Beryl..did you know that Champloo has disappeared still..i think he got ambushed
Beryl: great..another person gone from our adventures...
Mao: stop being sad over those delinquent friends of yours,Beryl!
Beryl: fine! *walks away* ...
Mao: well..anwyays..i think i will go see what Mokai is doing...
Mokai: *passes by* DAMN ORCS! STOP ATTACKING ME! *beats the hell out of the Vato Brothers*
Mao: *sees Mokai* well..thats one thing i know now...i think ill play my games then *goes back into the Overlords castle*
Mokai: hmph..im gonna go hang out with dad *runs up and glomps Mao*
Mao: what the hell---!? *sees he is being glomped* Mokai..dont hug me--..fine..ill let you hug me..i know you havent had the best life...this does not mean i have a soft spot!!
Mokai: ok then,dad! *starts squeezing him*
Mao: OH CRAP! *struggles* Mokai..your suffocating me..!

A FEW HOURS LATER
Mokai: *falls asleep while watching anime*
Beryl: Mao..do you think Mokai is a lot like you
Mao: your asking an obvious question,Beryl!
Beryl: i know i am
Almaz: um..Mao..can me and Sapphire go back to celestia for a while?
Mao: fine..i just want you guys to not lose your arms while battling with me...
Sapphire: *grabs Almaz and leaves*
Beryl: it was nice to let them go for a while...
Mao: i dont care!
Beryl: fine...im gonna go to another class..even if it is during the night
Mao: no..i wont let you leave..i would be lonely if you left!
Beryl: what? Mao...are you being wierd...what is with you
Mao: Beryl..i am serious..i dont want to be lonely! everytime i was playing my games i had someone come out of nowhere and bug me...
Beryl: fine ill stay..i guess
Mao: okay then..

A FEW HOURS LATER AGAIN
Beryl: *yawns* Mao..im tired..im gonna check on Mokai and go to bed..
Mao: fine..im almost done this game anyways..so..
Beryl: *walks away*
Mao: *hits himself in the face* why do i feel wierd when i see Beryl!!??! why!???!?! i do not have feelings for Beryl..or do i?!
Beryl: *comes back after a few minutes* good night..Mao..
Mao: ok then..
Beryl: *starts to leave*
Mao: wait,Beryl! *runs over to Beryl*
Beryl: what is it now?
Mao: i feel wierd everytime i see you and i think your stupidly adorable! *kisses Beryl..the stops after 3 seconds* um..anwyays...go continue doing your thing! *face turns red*
Beryl: *blushes* fine..Mao-y~! *leaves*
Mao: was that love? i think i understand it fully..i fell these wierd feelings towards Beryl! i must learn this...love...i think this love is differnt then family love..it must be! but..i will make sure no one finds out...no one must find out that..i..l-love...Beryl...

SERIES 1 END!!
SERIES 2 COMING SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now..you have all waited long for this...so now..here is Series 2 of the fanfic! Chapter 1 Part 1

Here is where the advnture starts
~The Nether School: Maritsu Evil Academy~
With the Overlord as Dean
Demons that act evil are labeled as Honor Student in this Famous school of Terror
and the Demons that act good are labeled as Delinquents
And while...one of the students,The Dean-to-be is Half-Honor Student and Half-Delinquent
This is the Adventure of Evil,you might lose your mind to the chaos
Dont say we didnt warn you


PrinnyA: *comes in* Master Mokai! its almost time for school,dood!
Mokai: *lays on the floor* cant go to class.Dad gave me a comic..to busy reading *drools*
PrinnyB: Master Mao must be the hugest influnce on Mokai,dood!
Mokai: shuddup,Peons! i am learning about a Hero's power so i can get that power!
PrinnyC: um..your the Heir to the Netherworld,The one and olny daughter of Overlord Mao: Dean of Maritsu Evil Academy, why do you want the power of a hero,dood?
Mokai: because! then i can beat up everyone that was mean to me when i was young! especially those damn orcs who hit me so i lost some of my EQ! they are the reason i have only 1.5 million EQ!
PrinnyA: that explains things,dood
Mokai: but there is a problem..
PrinnyB: whats that,dood?
Mokai: i dont know much about heroes
Raspberyl: *comes in* Mokai..please go to class..
Mokai: well...ill leave here...but i wont go to class..even if you attack me!
Beryl: crap...i can never get you to class
Mokai: i dont care,mom! i am an Honor Student! even if sometimes you forced me to class! you just made me more of an Honor Student! *leaves*
Beryl: *sighs* Mokai has been a lot like Mao..she got her hair in a ponytail becuase she didnt like spikey hair..and she is wearing her jacket like Mao does..Mao has been the biggest infulence to Mokai..even though i am a delinquent! i am supposed to influence my daughter! *gets a little annoyed

1-1 END!
1-2 coming soon!

Raspberyl: so, Mokai did you finnaly go to class without me forcing you?
Mokai: no.
Raspberyl: fine then, go back to reading your comics!
Mokai: fine then! *walks away* i need to learn more about heroes,mom! so get me more comics,video games, and anime!
Raspberyl: *sigh* why me..?

???: She is the dean-to-be yet she wants to learn about heroes? i dont get it
SideKick A: but, are you sure about eavesdropping? its for honor students!
Sidekick B: but we must eavesdrop! we wont be delinquents if Mokai gets to be more hero-like then us!

3 MINUTES LATER
Mokai: it has been 10 hours since i been away from home. i must learn how to be a hero so i can kick ass and rule Maritsu,just like dad! ..why is there a classroom in the way? *looks around* WHO'S THERE!?
Very Weak Demon: how did you know i was here?
Mokai: trying to attack me on campus? very honor student like!
Very Weak: damn straight! im Aruna! 1 of the Honor Flower Trio!
Mokai: meaning your part of a group?
Aruna: obviously.
Mokai: okay then! since your attacking me, its only right that i beat you!

MOKAI WON THE FIGHT
Mokai: ok then..time to go home now..
Another Demon: i saw you beat Aruna! but there is no way you can beat me! i am Aluna! the 2nd one of the Honor Flower Trio!
Mokai: oh gawd! *face palm*

ANOTHER BATTLE WON BY MOKAI..
Mokai: can i go home now!?
3rd Demon: i wont let you retreat to your home! i am Acuna! the 3rd of the Honor Flower---
Mokai: I GET IT!

OK MOKAI WON THIS BATTLE
Mokai: oh god..you demons are weak! did you think we can win againts me, the Heir to Maritsu Evil Academy, Overlord Mao's daughter!?
Aruna, Aluna and Acuna: WHAT!? we never even knew you were Mao's daughter!
Mokai: well then.. *runs off*